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Fire by jemaica Fire by jemaica
oh man will i ever be good at naming things? there should be a tutorial on naming artwork haha.
Anyways here is another drawing I did of a more fantasy style I guess! critiques are much appreciated
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:iconethershadow:
You really have a lovely piece here. There is a great tone and form balance with a good play of color and texture. The thing could be adjusted is the swirls that you added as the mid-tone orange you have at the top left of the painting is intersecting in an odd way with the hair. I would either place the hair in front of it or get rid of it all together personally removal might suit it better to add more lightness to the top of the frame because it seems to go into the head but never exit. The eyes are great but the lips could use some more tonal quality they look a touch flat and with that much light values floating about there should be a bit more specularity to to or color tone variation. It would really add some depth to it. The body is somewhat flat as well and coulr use some of what you did with the face to give it more solidity. You have a wonderful piece I really do enjoy it and a few tweaks to it could bring it to that really solid level. Bravo and keep up the great work =).
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Stolvezen Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like her expression ;p
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sweetsweetsunshines Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
pretty and I like the colors ^^
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jemaica Jan 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks!!
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Naariel Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey there! I hope it's okay that I feature this artwork in my journal: [link] :heart:
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jemaica Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
of course its ok!! thank you so much that means a lot!
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Naariel Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D :heart:
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TheSkaldofNvrwinter Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Laces of Fire
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Cherry-17 Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Very beautiful!
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thetoothofthehound Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
This is too cutee! I looooove it :D
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jemaica Dec 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you!!
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