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VN02 miku by jemaica VN02 miku by jemaica
Been working on this for the last three days on and off, I love the VN02 miku design, and I needed some practice. reference of the figure was used.

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EDIT: fixed some anatomy after my critiques
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The anatomy is very off, the arms, shoulders, boobs, torso and groin haven't clearly been thought out.

The biggest area for me is the bum, and side of her body to her groin, do me a favour, open this up in photoshop or whatever, get a red brush and line over the anatomy, I want you to point out where:

The belly button is
Her groin is
Her chest
Her hands
Her feet.


The biggest issue is, you're hiding what you don't know, and covering it up, it looks awkward!

I'll give this a red line at a later date if you need it, but do draw over it showing me where you think things are, so I can explain where you are going wrong.
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TurquoisePastel Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
this is just gorgeous! >w< i love the flow of the hair and the pose!
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jemaica Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thank you so much!!
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TurquoisePastel Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
you're welcome!!
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Nymonyrya Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Featured! [link] ;)
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jemaica Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
wow thanks! :0
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dansch Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
you are featured in my journal [link]
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jemaica Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks so much that means a lot!!!
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dansch Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
welcome :hug:
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Self-Epidemic Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I tried to do a redline, but the anatomy is all distorted, I think in honesty the best thing to focus on is some anatomy:

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Read/download these, go learn the basics! It'll really help!
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jemaica Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks so much!
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